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Antagonism revealed
Separatism spread out
all seems fine,
all seems defined

Because here, they give us rhetoric
The pride of mutual respect
in the name of healing and reconsiliation
while they are destructing the others
in the shadow of undercover mission

Tomorrow,
only few remained
watching all vanished
turned into ashes

There will be no more sorrow and anger
thirst and hunger
cause no one will remember
the struggle within,
remain reconqueror
:iconpedestrianrevolution:

Author's Comments

politics,polisi
I'm using my poetic license

don't find me
I'm not important

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:iconfledgist:
In line 11, 'fews' should be 'few'. In line 15 'thirsty' should be 'thirst'.

Otherwise a well-stated poem.

--
As we grow older, we do not get any younger.
:iconpedestrianrevolution:
Now U make my poem perfect!
hehe
it is challenging writing poem in English :)
Thx anyway

--
El-Amir
:iconartificial-haven:
strong words..i'm amazed..:heart:

--
"People are forever finding something wrong with you" - Brigitte Bardot

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December 19, 2007
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